Writing
a short story is an easy way to become familiar with the
process of writing.
The short story can take on many different forms
and one should allow them a measurable degree of
creative control regarding format and structure.
This is only intended as basic guide to writing a short story
and based on more conventional styles and structures. With an understanding of the following short story concepts,
the personal and creative possibilities and choices are
many.
Important
to remember is the notion “Show, don't
tell.” “Show,
don't tell” refers to allowing your characters
to express the story through their actions and
dialogue not through you the writer telling the
reader what is being expressed.
Here is a simplified example of how it
works. Instead
of telling the reader through your writing
“Joe was really mad at Kate for cheating with
another man” you should show this with your
writing: “With an ache in his stomach and a
heart that had been torn apart, Joe was grinding
his teeth as he approached Kate without
initiating the customary kiss that had become
routine during their year together. His pulse raced as he took in a deep breath, attempting to
calm the rage that was hammering every thought
he had of her.
Kate couldn’t look Joe in his crazed,
red eyes. Instead,
she fiddled with her hair as Joe’s stare
pierced though her masked guilt as he yelled:
‘I hope he was worth because now we’re
through!’”
Developing
a story idea is the first step.
Choose an idea that excites you and
ignites some passion and then define it with
these important components.
Theme
The
Theme of the story you are going to write could
be something that can help in our lives or
convey a message. Subtlety is important because you don't want to be preachy to
your reader and at the same time you shouldn't
have to explain what the moral of the story is.
The reader should be able to learn and
recognize the theme through your story.
Plot
In
order to keep the reader excited and interested
it is important to have a Plot, conflict or
struggle that your main character has to
overcome. This
struggle can be with another character or it can
be something a character struggles with inside
the character like feelings or emotions.
Most often the main character or the
hero/heroine should win or lose on their own and
not be rescued by someone else.
Conflict usually intensifies as the story
moves forward until it reaches its climax at the
end of the story.
Story
Structure
With
Story Structure, it’s imperative to quickly
whisk the reader directly into the action and
introduce the main character or hero/heroine.
This is where you'll have to decide
whether to tell your story in "first
person" or "third person."
Writing
in First person is telling the story as if it
were happening to you by using the pronoun
"I." Writing in Third person is telling the story as if it's all
about other people by using the pronouns
"he," "she," "it."
At
first, writing a short story from the first
person point of view seems simple, you just
write as if you were the character telling the
story. However,
when getting further involved, there is more to
consider. There
are three different kinds of first-person
narrators: "I" who tells his/her own
story, "I" who tells the story of
someone else they have observed, and
"I" who retells a story told to them.
Additionally, there are many other
techniques for writing such styles of narrative,
these include:
Dramatic
monologue – The story is written as if the
viewpoint character is speaking aloud to an
audience.
Interior
monologue –The story is written as the
viewpoint character feels it, relives it and
reflects on it. This type of story takes the reader along the character's
journey of self-discovery.
Usually the reader will end up knowing
more than the character does.
Journal
or diary – The story is written as if the
viewpoint character is making a private record
of events in a journal or diary without the
intention of being read by others.
Letter
- The story is written as if the viewpoint
character is recording events, either as they
happen or after the fact, in a letter to one or
more individuals.
The narrator is aware that at least one
other person will read it, but what they record
may depend on whether this is a private,
intimate letter to one person, or a more general
letter to a whole family.
Public
journal - The story is written as if the
viewpoint character is recording events, either
as they happen or after the fact, for more
public consumption. Imagine old explorers who
kept journals of their expeditions and then
published them later or sent parts home to be
published as the journey went on.
Using
the Third person point of view tells the story
through the eyes of just one character-usually
the hero/heroine. The third person point of view is the most common for writing
fiction, but choosing this point of view is more
complicated than simply writing "he,"
"she" or "they" to describe
the action.
There are three types of third-person
narrators with many possible variations for
each.
Omniscient
– The story is written in the third person
omniscient point of view where the narrator
knows everything, allowing the writer to mention
the thoughts and feelings of any character, and
to insert narrative comments.
The narrative can also skip around to
different places and times, filling in
back-story at any point in the present story.
The challenges of this point of view are
that sometimes it is difficult to maintain a
consistent voice, it can feel impersonal to the
reader and it is less believable than the other
styles.
Objective
– The story is written in the third person
objective point of view, the narrator knows only
what can be heard and seen from outside the
characters.
Imagine the narrator as recording events
like a movie camera.
All the thoughts and emotions of the
characters are unavailable, so the story must
speak for itself.
The challenge of this point of view is
that it can lack emotion and often create a cold
and uninvolved feeling to the story.
Limited
– The story is written in the third person
limited omniscient point of view where the
narrator knows everything about one character
including thoughts and feelings.
The other characters are only known
through that one person.
This type of viewpoint can be so close to
the character that it is nearly a first person
point of view, or it can pull back for a broader
view. Because
of its many advantages, this point of view is
often thought of as the default.
After
choosing a point of view one must decide whether
to tell the story in the present or past tense.
Past tense is writing the story as if it
already happened, present tense is writing the
story as it is happening right now. Once you have chosen your tense it is important to stick to
it and not switch between tenses because it will
confuse the reader.
Setting
Decide
on a Setting for the story, a place and time
that are interesting and familiar to you.
You can create and imagine a fantasy
setting or research a specific setting but it is
important to be comfortable with what you are
writing. Write
what you know about.
Style
and Tone
Style
and tone is the language or dialogue you use
that is right for your story.
Always use action and dialogue to let the
reader know what's happening whenever possible.
Remember when writing your short story to
"show, don't tell."
Characters
Dialogue
should be in direct quotes like "Come
help!" instead of indirect quotes as
"He told her to come help."
Don't complicated dialogue with difficult
words or with too many words. To write well,
simpler is usually stronger and less is most
often more.
Finally, choose the best word-the one
that is closest to your meaning and gives the
clearest image possible. If you can't think of a
word, use a thesaurus.
Now
that you have some insight into story structure,
the next step is to start writing your short
story. The
concept of a beginning, middle and end can be
considered and kept in mind but many interesting
short stories don’t take that linear approach.
Reading short stories is a great way to
learn about them and the many different styles
in which they can be written.
Writing your short story should be a
creative process that reveals itself to you as
go along. As
you grow into the writing process you will know
what is right and what works because it will
feel organic to you when it does.
Andrew
was
educated at Trinity College in Dublin, Ireland
and the University of California at Santa Cruz.
He has authored The Cigar Connoisseur
along with numerous magazine articles on cigars,
food & wine and travel. Aside from these areas of interest, Andrew has written for
both film and television having sold an original
screenplay as well as a two-hour A&E
Biography.